Sunday, 27 February 2011

Love in all its many guises


The other night I went along to listen to Michael Arditti read from his most recent novel Jubilate. It tells the story of Vincent and Gillian, who begin a passionate affair in Lourdes where she has brought her brain-damaged husband. The sceptical Vincent is there making a TV documentary about the shrine's 150th anniversary. I liked the idea that these two people who have such differing beliefs could find each other in this most unlikely of places. Also, the way the story is structured appealed to me. It is told from both their points of view, but while one of them tells their story in chronological order, the other does so backwards. I've not come across this structure before so I'm intrigued to see how it works on the page.

Anyhow, despite telling myself I wouldn't buy any more books until I had read what I have by my bedside (11 books at the moment - eek), I came away from the talk with two: Jubilate and a book of Michael's short stories. Well, if you want to be a writer, you have to read lots. That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it!

When talking about the unconventional structure of this novel, Michael said that in each book he has written so far he tries to do something different with it - to keep it interesting for his readers but also for himself. This made me sit up and take notice as I've been struggling with a few short stories I've written recently. Funny enough, one was a love story. I'd never written one before and thought I'd give it a go. But somehow I just couldn't find the main character's true voice and the tone of the story didn't seem right either. So I've shelved it for the time being and will come back to it another day.

It can be easy to get into a writing rut - perhaps your characters are often the same sort of person or you always write in the third person or you've never told a tale in a different order to the one the events happened in. We have to challenge ourselves as writers and also experiment and see what happens. Without doubt some experiments will be more successful than others but I thought to myself I should try and do something a bit different in each of my stories (different for me, that is.) Don't worry - I'm not going to start limiting myself to using words that only contain the first half of the alphabet or anything so radical. I just mean I should try and use more of the tools open to us as writers. I'll keep you posted on my progress.

Oh before I forget, the other thing I picked up from Michael's talk the other night was when writing a love story you want the reader to truly engage with, at least one of the main characters has to have a lot to lose from the affair. Maybe that's where I've been going wrong with my story... Hmm back to the drawing board methinks.

10 comments:

  1. This is very interesting. And the last paragraph - so true! I was applying it to romances I've read lately and I think in every case this has been so. What an excellent tip.
    And you can never have too many books - now I think I may have to add Jubilate to my pile.

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  2. Wow, David, You just won't believe this I'm writing my first real love story. Hey, I'm a dark writer who doesn't normally do lovey dovey stuff, but I thought I would give it a go. So thank you for your tip, maybe it's just where I'm going wrong too.

    I like the idea of writing lots of different things to, to keep my mind fresh and for of new ideas. I just feel if I same to one style I'll run out of ideas, though having said that it's harder to stay focused on one thing at a time.

    Maybe I just can't win :-)

    Great posting,

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  3. A really interesting post, David - thank you!

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  4. I'm enjoying your blog, David, and I have awarded you a Stylish Blogger Award. Details at http://teresaashby.blogspot.com/ I hope you will share seven things about yourself on your blog and pass the baton to 15 more bloggers, but no worries if you’d rather not.

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  5. Great post, David. I'm really looking forward to reading your love story when you're ready to post it.

    Thank you for the advice, too - definitely something to keep in mind. M&B seem to be quite hot on internal conflict at the moment and once I worked that out, I realised that most of my love story conflicts are external. Of course, knowing this still doesn't mean I can write what they want.

    XX

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  6. Thanks for the post, David! Great advice and tips for romance. I'm quite keen on internal conflicts in romances. I really enjoy writing about character development.

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  7. It's surprisingly easy to fall into a writing rut - but maybe that style is our 'voice'.

    It's good to step outside the comfort zone occasionally though. I tried writing a ghost story for the first time last year and thoroughly enjoyed it, but I've never got to grips with crime. About time I had another try I think!

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  8. Hi Teresa. Thank you SO much for the award. Apologies for not posting up my responses yet but I'll do that today. I promise!

    Thank you Jarmara. You are absolutely right. Writing new (and different) things keeps it interesting and fresh for us too. And I guess it can only be interesting for our readers if it first of all interests us...

    Thank you Mandy!

    I've shelved my love story for the time being, Suzanne as I just couldn't get it to seem realistic enough. Think I need to go back to the drawing board on the MC's motivation... But I know you're the expert in that field so I'll come knocking on your door when I dust it down and finish it off!

    Hi Talli. I suppose in real life issues that keep people apart are as often as not in their heads rather than coming from outside so it's definitely a good area to explore.

    You're right Karen. It's all too easy to write off a certain genre, deciding it's just not something that you 'do'. But at tough times like these for writers, it's probably a good idea to be able to show you can turn your hand to different genres. Who's up for writing the next big Zombie western romance?!?

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  9. Hi David. Lovely to meet and follow you. Your bedside table must look like mine!

    Thanks for your thoughtful post. I like the advice, especially the last paragraph. Yes, back to the drawing board.

    Denise

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  10. Lovely to see you here, Denise. Yes, I do sleep in perpetual fear of being knocked over the head by the latest blockbuster. But hey ho. There are worse ways to go, I suppose... ; )

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